ohwhatawalrus's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Billy Suicide]

a very interesting concept here. In order to attain happiness you need to find a perfect balance. Work too much, and you'll have lots of money but be depressed, play too much and you'll be happy but broke. It was fun to play, and is rather thought provoking.

[Guild Dungeons 2]

always love your games Hyptosis!
Great graphics, and great gameplay as always.

[Yaoi Game- Find Your Goy]

Storyline: Underdeveloped. It feels more like I was shoved in the middle of a random story, and not everything makes a lot of sense to be frank. It is also incredibly short and I feel it needs more options, as that is a key part of what makes dating sims successful.
Graphics: They aren't fantastic. Maybe you should have started with a pencil sketch, and you don't necessarily need a tablet to create good graphics. There are lots of artists who create amazing stuff without using them, I just think you need to practice more.
Writing: There are lots of grammatical errors, which may not bother some people but I find that it looks slightly unprofessional. Spell check is pretty easy to use, and if English isn't your first language I'm sure there are lots of people who would be willing to look over the writing and help correct it.
I've never felt that newgrounds was a place to upload "experiments" or first games. This isn't the place for it. Newgrounds is where you showcase your best stuff, and since it's so open anyone can post their creations regardless of whether they work from some big gaming company or from their mother's basement. My word of advice, take your time before you upload something!

[PUNCH SKY IN THE FACE!]

bad graphics, and the play button doesn't work right, and the game isn't really interesting. Plus, I don't even know who "sky" is. Usually games like this use a more notable character to draw people in. Take your time before submitting something!

[The Sagittarian 4: Bayou]

Hyptosis, I love you. :')
As always, the art work is beautiful, the plot is wonderful, and I have yet to find any bugs. I just wish I could make you a love sandwich.

[Papa's Hot Doggeria]

I love your games, they are all so addicting, and they never feel boring since something new is always added.

[Last Day of Homeless]

i honestly think you need to put more research into homelessness.
This game was insulting, the urine stains on his pants especially.