ohwhatawalrus's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Billy Suicide]

a very interesting concept here. In order to attain happiness you need to find a perfect balance. Work too much, and you'll have lots of money but be depressed, play too much and you'll be happy but broke. It was fun to play, and is rather thought provoking.

[Raymond's Quest]

I understand you are new to creating games, but I'm not sure that Newgrounds is the place for uploading tests or first-time-designs. Newgrounds is all about showcasing your best stuff, and is open in the sense that you don't have to be part of a big gaming company in order to submit something.
The game is tiny, and there is no challenge to finding anything in the game, which I suppose it understandable because this is a test. I recommend that you take this time to fine tune your skills before uploading something. I'm sure there are plenty of people who you can PM to get advice on making games. Best of luck, and I hope to see more of your stuff in the future! :)

CheckeredStache responds:

Thank you, I will definitely take your advice and make some more finely tuned and challenging games before I upload them to Newgrounds.

[Guild Dungeons 2]

always love your games Hyptosis!
Great graphics, and great gameplay as always.

[Dropped the soap]

Usually I try to give some form of constructive criticism, but honestly this is just awful. I'm not sure how this managed to get past judgement.
I suppose the graphics are okay, being pixel art and all,
but the game is tedious and boring, it's glitchy, it's not really a fighting game, the writing is filled with obvious grammatical errors, and it really just seems like a bad idea.
Back to the drawing board bro. This time, maybe take a little longer to think things through before uploading...

[Yaoi Game- Find Your Goy]

Storyline: Underdeveloped. It feels more like I was shoved in the middle of a random story, and not everything makes a lot of sense to be frank. It is also incredibly short and I feel it needs more options, as that is a key part of what makes dating sims successful.
Graphics: They aren't fantastic. Maybe you should have started with a pencil sketch, and you don't necessarily need a tablet to create good graphics. There are lots of artists who create amazing stuff without using them, I just think you need to practice more.
Writing: There are lots of grammatical errors, which may not bother some people but I find that it looks slightly unprofessional. Spell check is pretty easy to use, and if English isn't your first language I'm sure there are lots of people who would be willing to look over the writing and help correct it.
I've never felt that newgrounds was a place to upload "experiments" or first games. This isn't the place for it. Newgrounds is where you showcase your best stuff, and since it's so open anyone can post their creations regardless of whether they work from some big gaming company or from their mother's basement. My word of advice, take your time before you upload something!

[PUNCH SKY IN THE FACE!]

bad graphics, and the play button doesn't work right, and the game isn't really interesting. Plus, I don't even know who "sky" is. Usually games like this use a more notable character to draw people in. Take your time before submitting something!

[The Sagittarian 4: Bayou]

Hyptosis, I love you. :')
As always, the art work is beautiful, the plot is wonderful, and I have yet to find any bugs. I just wish I could make you a love sandwich.

[Papa's Hot Doggeria]

I love your games, they are all so addicting, and they never feel boring since something new is always added.

[The 4th Dimension]

It isn't a game, though I do understand that you haven't been able to move it.
You are missing a whole lot of information on the 4th dimension, including the 3rd.
For one thing, we are able to see in three dimensions. If we were to put it into terms of an axis, in 2D we would only have 2 axis, generally labeled as X axis and Y axis, however in terms of 3D an extra axis is added which we can call the Z axis, which goes through the intersection of X and Y. (Perpendicular to X) This axis gives us the visual of depth, which we could see easily on a cube. 2D = length and width 3D = length, width and depth. Using an apple to demonstrate this was not a good choice, since an apple is somewhat sphere like in shape, and spheres are difficult to show in 3D due to the fact that they have no vertices. The 4th dimension is an abstract concept, that represents space, time, and physics (like gravity). To even begin to understand this, you'd have to have a great understanding of what time is, relatively, and be able to comprehend vectors. I find it ironic that you used a moving dot at the end to represent 2D, when many scientists describe the 4th dimension as looking like a dot. Your presentation is missing a lot of information, and many of your arguments have holes in them. Also, there were a few grammatical errors.
This was very interesting to watch, however I suggest learning a bit more about the subject.

[Last Day of Homeless]

i honestly think you need to put more research into homelessness.
This game was insulting, the urine stains on his pants especially.